We have started 2018 sharing some information about ourselves with the world.
I wrote to share about My spare time with you.
I have worked on editing it to check that my capital letters and full stops are correct.
I have used feedback from my learning buddy and my teacher to make it the more interesting and effective.
My friends.
I just want to tell you about my friends.
My friends are... Aano, Breeze, Madison, Rina, Mel, kaylah, Sareta, Aysha and Jahn. I chose them because they’re fun to play with.
I like Kaylah because she is so funny.
My sister Sareta is nice and she is good at hiding me at home, like last time at home, my sister hid me under my bed. When my little sister Tausili came in she didn't know I was hiding under my bed.
Aysha is nice and fun.
Mel is cool and funny.
Jahn is quiet and fun too.
-Abigail
